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Old 03-22-2016, 01:20 AM   #11
symetrik
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... on a path paved with pain, dirt terrain stained with gravel
takes rein n' saddle across plains of grazing cattle
aims to trap you in a grave, never again your flame'll crackle
his face in the shadow, his demeanor is wicked
his bucket list consists of bunches of stiffs eager to kick it
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life's a flowing river that could dry up in the blink of it
as death will lead his horse to water n' get him to drink from it
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try to hold your own n' keep goin', don't let him get to you
it's hard to hurdle the lies while tryin' to ride a stretch of truth
love love love the last line, great imagery.

asylum

honestly dug the entire thing the whole way through
such a good ending, made me reread with much deeper appreciation.

mvgt @asylum
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