timeless
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Truth been spoken, one shot wonder through a cracked lens.
Eye on the prize yet it seems my view's in past tense.
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Chaotic. Today's topic at hand involves delayed logic.
Amazed? Nonsense. I'm only here on mission to raise prophets.
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no
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Saved by the bell at noon yet I'm in London by two.
Now you must know why I'm always lunging at you.
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the no section though... just barely. everything else had a stronger sense to it. great piece.
frank
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The challenger paces with amateur impatience, as the Champion engages the standing ovation: Earlobes implode
"Low and behold, Ladies and Gentlemen, we are live at ringside, in what hopes to be a heroic show"
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no
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"A glutton for punishment, this Fighter is nothing against the Champion who has unloaded ferociously"
Rolling with the punches, the challenger is hit with voltage to the button, folded from its toll
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again, just barely with the no section. just hard to fit in that "ferociously" in my head. piece really came across feeling like a live event.
mvgt @
Frank