Mvgt Buddha
Buddha, that whole first bit where you were twisting the "iminent/eminent" scheme with almost a jazz style arraignment was great, just enough lyrical prowess but pulled off smoothly where it didn't seem forced and I could easily catch the flow and meaning on first read. I also enjoyed the sick take you took on the picture, rather than going for the dark and drab you almost turned the evil into a happy feeling.
Jes - honestly, had you not used such a huge block of "tion" rhymes, you probably would've got my vote, but it just took me out of the scene every time I read it. You had some really killer unorthodox multis, but there seemed almost forced, there just wasn't a definitive flow I could pick up throughout,
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