Timeless, dope verse homie. That closer was so sick to me.
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A mirrored image of the world, pride with shattered glass encased.
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Dope. I enjoyed the second half more than the first, but it was still a very solid piece. Flow was real clean, rhyming was on point, all that good shit. Although, your opening bars kind of threw me off. Definitely think the second half was more related to the topic.
Frank, dope shit. I'm not going to quote nothing because, to be honest, I don't think you had a line in there that was quotable. What separates you is how you write the over all verse, being descriptive and keeping an engaging flow. I kind of felt like if this was being said over the radio, back when people sat around a radio & "imagined" the fight, this would've been one hell of an announcer. I'm still not sure how I feel about the length of your lines. Seems kind of unfair, it's almost literally putting in 2 bars in every one bar, and what stops it from coming off like that (somewhat) are the internals. Either way, very enjoyable read from both but Frank just hit the topic more to me.
vFrank