Lol @
Mr. J making complete verses as his feed...
Anyways I wasn't really overly impressed with either of these pieces. I thought artifice was decent but he didn't really tackle the topic until halfway through his verse...whereas otoh asylum kept to the content better but again I didn't enjoy how some of his rhymes didn't even rhyme at the end of his lines but overall I think he tackled his topic better then artifice but good luck to both of these lyricists....
Vote..... Asylum