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asylum · 03-20-2016, 06:17 AM

dropped jesodist feed first because i thought i was reading who started the topic.. @JESODIST
hah you really warmed up about halfway through g. you got skills man rhymes for days no doubt about it. this piece was very peaceful for your work man. i enjoyed the change of tone, you should do some storytelling with this kind of tone. keep em comin.
@Mr. J, this was really dope bro. i truly enjoyed it. great piece, lots of hard hitting subject matter. the rhymes weren't hashed out because it wasn't one you stuck to, but I appreciate the angle and encourage you to polish it up a bit. this could be a real gem.

03-20-2016, 06:17 AM	#3
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	dropped jesodist feed first because i thought i was reading who started the topic.. @JESODIST hah you really warmed up about halfway through g. you got skills man rhymes for days no doubt about it. this piece was very peaceful for your work man. i enjoyed the change of tone, you should do some storytelling with this kind of tone. keep em comin. @Mr. J, this was really dope bro. i truly enjoyed it. great piece, lots of hard hitting subject matter. the rhymes weren't hashed out because it wasn't one you stuck to, but I appreciate the angle and encourage you to polish it up a bit. this could be a real gem. Last edited by asylum; 03-20-2016 at 06:20 AM.