Not too sure if i can vote. I'll drop some feed nonetheless.
The Law: Each multi set flowed well. You related well to the grime image of the old man, giving a vivid image of the phases he's going through. You lacked depth, but that's what I liked about your topical i.e. the direct approach of this "topic".
breathless: Your approach to your image was fresh. One could follow the death scene, instead you took us in her complex dying inside world. Your vocab wasn't as profound as The Law, but your concept was well thought out and executed nicely.
MVGT: The Law. It was close, I believe it might come down to preference. I felt that The Law brought a bit more to the table.
P.s. I understand if my vote is void. Good battle fellas
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