Quote:
But, I don’t want them to down spiral too quickly,
I prefer seeing their bones and muscle fibers turn sickly
Slowly consuming them,
While I’m off buying the best whiskey.
Pristine and pure, that’s the Eugenic perspective.
Cleansing carnal sin off, that’s the genetic objective.
|
you sick fuck... lol, nah but that part was nice, really your entire verse was great, i especially liked the menacing laugh at the end lol. this was a very thought provoking piece, though usually i dont like pieces that i have to read more than once, i was ok with this one, these lines pretty much sum it up
Quote:
Spoonful medicine of poison, in return for employment.
They waste away for our enjoyment.
Religiously reading the bible as a cynic,
Finding God sponsors survival of the fittest.
But, we must critique, & not mindlessly listen.
Let the third eye open within
And let forth the tyrant from his prison.
|
very nice @GodComplex
the fuck did i just read jesodist? you need church bruh lol.
honestly this was probably better written than the first two verses i read from you even though i didnt enjoy the content much, and to be honest i have no clue what picture you wrote to which makes it very hard for me to see any relation to the pictures ( and yes i did check) this was my favorite part though
Quote:
With Battle wounds that stratch from the Mouth to the Ear with huge Cuts Everywhere,
Hell risen walking an Ominous trail after Denouncing all his Monsterous Peers,
Which caused in him an Insidious Ressurection, Encompassing evil to the Brink of Perfection,
Altering his molecular structure his arms become blades that Rip into Sections,
Any Victim that enters the cave where he Sits in Detention
Mind without a gaze in a Sinking Dimension,
Army of demons appear on his Hideous Complexion, Awaiting orders Too Hideous to Mention,
|
ok so, im going to have to go with GC here because of the fact that 1 a just really enjoyed his verse, probably my favorite ive read this week, and 2 without you posting the pic you wrote about JES i couldnt really get into it, plus the content is a little too dark for me :( so with that being said, this week mvgt = Godcomplex
nice match guys