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Old 03-19-2016, 06:53 PM   #7
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Awesome mag.

As far the rhyme focus instead of plot driven, everyone should be incorporating both. Thats my opinion, anyways. Bad flow and rhyme scheme will make a shit verse just as much as a shit story will. I was made to believe we were on a lyrical content forum rather than just a 'content' forum.

Also, as for the writers block section, I agree with the shorter lines most of the time. I feel like people think it makes there verse better because it's longer. But in most cases it's the opposite. Too many mistakes and drifting away from keeping it interesting for the readers.

Anyways, great read. I look forward to reading and voting on the battles about a week from now. Asylum told me the Jamaican lady on his block said she is running out of her old extensions to hand out and mothafuckers are gonna start paying up for her new ones.
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