Hush.. After reading, I think this is a solid drop, but not as fierce as some of your past drops. You got them bars that are very simple in their flips, which works very well when you pull it off, but can kinda come off lame if you don't have that razor sharp wording.
Aim at ya brain. Last thing u hears the lead banging
Nickname the 40 shame shit a leave your head hanging
^Dope.
This chubby white guy log online and turn thug txter
Lift guns? Only thing dangerous Fatty raise is his blood pressure
^ Ehh. Too simple.
It's nothing to let off the glock then tuck it hot
Act of bravery. one shot to show how much guts he got
^Pretty good, but it's walking that line.
Nigga we ain't rivals. U copy my blueprint I'm damn near ur idol
I give him a a buck 50 then tell him turn the other cheek. I'm the bible
^I don't like this.
I go beast. You just obese. Gluttony is the bane of This sinner
U got a eating disorder called desert always before dinner
^I like the in-rhymes in the setup, but the punch was too basic.
Wana be a batman villian just like me now that you ain't King
We equal the day wrangler jeans an wrangler jeep are the same thing
^^ This is kinda funny, but not that direct. Setup wording is straight weird.
On the other site u was top dog. Here u just fail
On rb u was the big fish and offline u always be considered a whale
^^ Too simple.
kill ur whole family and never snitch. Tell the judge that my gat pop
give a fuck about a lower case they can put my sentence on caps lock
^^Dope.
U ain't been thru the shit that I ride thru. Pistol beside u
For chicken we Bucket out the window this the kfc drive thru
^^Dope.
Even ya chick say Ima marksmen she know I hit the spot
Long dick a thot. Aim and spray it's 3some head. Split the top
^^Closer a little wordy.
It's about a 50/50 split for me with lines I was feeling and lines that I thought were a little too simple or forced.
Strange - there's a chink on the armour of the champ as far as I'm concerned, so I'm hoping you can take advantage of that because Hush doesn't have many off-days
We similar but not the same. I got premo, u puffin some reg
I roll on fakes w/ the heat, He trippin on sugar pills covered in sweat
^^Not my style of diss.
Been streakin. but if he think this politics as usual then son batty
He's gettin stomped n tossed the fuck out, this politics at a Trump rally
^^ok reference.
I kill wack rapper nerds. Faggot we can take it past the words
U got two choices n neither good, battlin me gets u hurt bad or worse
^^that's just kinda bad, bro.
We know he dont duck, he's too short, but watch this guy hide
When I raise arms u'll see the running start like I offered him a high five
^^decent concept but the wording is fucking it up a bit.
Ya whip prolly 4 colors. I bet u smoke dog shit n get rocked son
Short spanish stoner w/ a 'stache? U'll be cheech n chongin the shotgun
^That's pretty good visuals and tie-ins with the setup. Solid.
Real recognize real, s'why ya new style started losin u respect
My gun's money, I never miss.Your gun's bitcoin, u only use it on the net
^^Dope.
David vs Goliath w/ no slingshot. The odds are lookin poor kid
This lil geek 'bout 5'4, so I'd bet 3 To 1 my fire hits launch him into orbit
^^Dope again. That's actually hilarious. Picking up some steam now.
This kid is trash. Shots hit em in the mouth, cut his lip in half
U'll see me split his 'stache like the crew hit em for everything he has
^^Alright.
n If u hit on dimes ur just spinnin wheels, short aint attractive
Halfling bastard, if u peel off a skrrt it's cuz u saw me comin n gassed it
^^I don't like.
He 30 still actin 16. Life passed em by n he front like it dont hurt
Hush in his 2nd childhood, too bad this one dont come w/ a growth spurt
^^Don't like.
Yo Strange, a pretty slow start, imo. It started picking up with the Cheech and Chong line, and had a few good haymakers after that. I still think Hush got more hits than Strange. I gotta take voerall feel of the entire verse into account too, and Hush's felt more aggressive and raw in tone.
Vote -- Hush
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