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Old 03-18-2016, 09:57 PM   #6
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Bored at work.

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Here

Hush

Opener was cool. Clean execution..oddly enough never heard of that angle . Thought it was fresh
Fatty raise is a clean compact flip on a really old concept . OK bar I suppose
Bible was aight
Gone @ desert line tho . Lol that would get some laughs in a crowd ..IMHO
Wrangler was more snf ish but I'm fucking w/ it coz thus far it fits the verse ur putting out . Under closer inspection wasn't much there but on to the next
Whale eh a
Caps lock sheeesh . That's a bar for a track fuck u doing
Chicken bucket was cleaaan
Closer was nuttts . Something about the aim and spray it's 3some head seemed clunky but split the top/ sharing dutiesfellatio angle was nice

Good shjt hush u barring can't front


King

Open. Mmm iono ..the roll on fakes w/ the heat sugar pill link was on some jiggly puff shit iono
Trump was eh to me
Bad to worse was clean af but kinda light imo
Love running start. Loved how you tweaked the latter phrase ..evocative
Cheech n chong was creative
Bitcoin was cool
The launch scheme was cute . No homo . Thought that was an odd but refreshing approach on a gunbar
The second stache bar was prolly a bad idea. Trouble is I liked this one more than the previous ..unfortunately part of me is like bro but u just used a stache play
Skirt was fucking fire
Closer came off ass to me

I think I have it tied ? Ionoo lol too many variables. Hush lackadaisical approach n some segments ...almost as if he were free flowing conceptually n just decided to stick w/ what resulted from a "session"

Anddd

Kings usage of the two stache plays?

N his slow start?



Iono homie started off slow but picked up in a major way


I'm thinking hush got it by a slim margin tho ..desert line was lotb n in retrospect he seemed a bit more consistent

V/hush

Interesting battle fellas
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