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Old 05-10-2013, 07:31 PM   #7
Mr. J
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At first this reminded me of some Styles P type of stuff
it didn't come off corny at all, the flow was on point
the word choice was perfectly done, and you kept my attention
you gave the two other parts character with your involvement
and brought together a sly ass piece my dude...sick shit
the brain has got it down pat though
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