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Old 03-16-2016, 12:55 AM   #3
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This was pretty smooth, almost like a mini comic book from scene to scene
I enjoyed the transitioning of this because it felt like there was more said in so little
from the growth to the pain to the knowledge & ending on a thoughtful approach
smooth shit Zen, nice to see you around.
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