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Old 03-15-2016, 12:57 AM   #13
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MVGT Razah

Soulful fucking topic. God Complexes interpretation of the topic just didn't quite click for me like The Razah's did. Godcomplex started his verse off alluding to the topic with smells and such, then disregarded the starting premise, the entirety of the verse, before shoe horning the sweet potato topic into an irrelevant line, then he would repeat the line once more,again for good measure, to cover up the fact, the piece had absolutely nothing to do with sweet potatoe pie.. The Razah simply sugar coated his piece effectively enough that the approach could pay off. God Complex loosely based interpretation did not touch on the topic the way The Razah embodied it.

Interpretation was the lone factor in my decision.

Pardon the brevity, fellahs, voted from a phone
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