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Alice White · 03-14-2016, 08:31 PM

Symetrik -

I thought that the scheme and switch ups you employed were the highlights of this verse. A very smooth read throughout, the multis seemed really natural as well. I also appreciate the direct tone of this and the certain humorous elements you had in the beginning. Content-wise, I thought it was nice, the ending was quite entertaining.

Echo -

Your opening bar was one of the highlights of your verse, tbh. It really sets an original tone. I also like the balance of the direct talk and the imagery-based narrative. A smooth read throughout. The content you depicted was interesting and rather original with an obviously Wild Wild West take on the topic. Both verses seemed similar in terms of schemes, though, so I'd go with the more entertaining work here.

Mvgt - Echo

03-14-2016, 08:31 PM	#11
Alice White Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 72 Rep Power: 0	Symetrik - I thought that the scheme and switch ups you employed were the highlights of this verse. A very smooth read throughout, the multis seemed really natural as well. I also appreciate the direct tone of this and the certain humorous elements you had in the beginning. Content-wise, I thought it was nice, the ending was quite entertaining. Echo - Your opening bar was one of the highlights of your verse, tbh. It really sets an original tone. I also like the balance of the direct talk and the imagery-based narrative. A smooth read throughout. The content you depicted was interesting and rather original with an obviously Wild Wild West take on the topic. Both verses seemed similar in terms of schemes, though, so I'd go with the more entertaining work here. Mvgt - Echo __________________ https://theprincesstroll.wordpress.com