[Echo]

Timeless, i liked the take on the topic because you built a world and brought me to it. i also liked a lot of the imagery and the level of good quality phrasing was very consistent. at times the rhyme pattern was very rigid and there were awkward phrases to keep it going. overall i enjoyed the story it just coulda been fleshed out a little more to really transport me

Asylum, i loved a couple of things about the verse but there were times when your abstract style made it hard for me to connect with it as a reader. i dig the style a lot but it's just that this verse came up against a story driven verse. there were one or two gems in there but it just fell short in terms of really drawing me in. your writing itself was very very good and the wording was wekk crafted throughout

it's hard to vote on this because asylum probably wrote at a higher level throughout but i enjoyed the story driven aspect of timeless' verse

i will edge this battle to timeless but only because I resonated with his style and delivery more