[IamBenT]

Wow fantastic verse.

So moving so sad, really Hemingway-esque in its plain and blunt fashion. I enjoyed this
as much and even more than some of your pieces in the AOWL. Some places where things might have been reworded for flow, but your use helped with the clarity which I felt was very important in this piece.

So straightforward, real, and just a great piece man