Sym, your style reminds me of zenland with a hint of copycat. Your natural writing abilities are dope and have a very high ceiling that you will hopefully reach by seasons end. Everything about this was so dope until the sudden, forced ending. You should've fleshed that out more, because it probably cost you my vote.
Echo, such a weird read. That's not to say I didn't enjoy it. I just feel that there were too many lines deliberately placed that fucked up the flow and delivery of it all. Trust me I write like this often, but it's hard to keep it going if u have the reader on edge just to get pushed off, ya dig? I appreciate your ambition here.
V. Symetrik
Really hard to choose a winner, I usually take ambition over all in close/loose battles like this but I got sym just because of how naturally it read. Look forward to more work from both of you.
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