timeless, very solid piece. This is probably the best verse I've seen from you, very enjoyable. No complains here.
asylum- Complains everywhere. I don't know, I really couldn't grasp where you were going with this, and I just read it twice. Ehh, I dunno man, just not very intrigued by it. The second time reading it, it felt like I was just going through the motions of reading it to see if I understood it more but I just wasn't very interested by that time. Although, I thought this couplet was very sickkk.
inscriptions listing lasting depictions, visions from hell.
Perhaps even one’s from which our existence was built,
Besides that, very difficult read for me. Not difficult actually, just, it didn't really connect for me. Timeless on the other hand, was the complete opposite. Kudos, very dope verse bruh.
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