So I'm gunna be honest... seen better from you both
Mr. J I feel like you only wrote this to meet the deadline, not much effort was put into this, and really the only connection I see to the topic was the last line. This was written well though, I enjoyed it for what it was
Franklin,
This was lazy on your part compared to your usual writing but I will say I was entertained, more so at your attempts to speak (hood talk) than the actual writing itself. The descriptivness and your ability to tell a story out of anything is what ultimately won this out for you imo...
Mvgt=frank
|