Mmlp, enjoyed how easy going this was for such a cop out of a concept. Everyone usually tries to twist netcees into their concept once or twice and more often that not they fail. I enjoyed the emotion you displayed, had it all building up good but the ending failed. Def seen it coming after the first few bars tbh
Max, after reading this twice I just see a slab of different ideas thrown into a pigpen of forced wordplay. You definitely have some of the best potential out of anyone in this league that's "new", you just need to piece everything together more accordingly.
V. Mmlp for the smooth read and complete thought. Almost let it go tho feel u underestimated max. Max def will be a threat soon if he keeps it moving.
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