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Originally Posted by jilti
Opener, Shrapnel, Stumbles & Closer
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The brutal imagery is dope asf, makes the punches heavier, still the wording can be smoother.
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Originally Posted by Letterman
Just Married
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Honestly I've seen your concepts before, fresher/harsher flips would've helped, otherwise naw.
Overall
JILTI beasted in comparison to Letterman's drop.