[Hush]

Originally Posted by Wanderer

I'll shiv this cunt in the abdomen for cheating to fuse a win
So you can recycle internals all you like.. that kindey'll never be used again
----The hell does fuse a win mean lol punch is ok but the bar is a L cuz of he nonsensical setup
probs molested as a kid but I can help. the blade will bury depression
Opening you up til horrible shit starts to spill out, that's a therapy session
---fire good setup too
You're boring & I know why You'll never claim a girls hand
Cos If there's ever a chick who Smoke Meats you know she doesn't like anything bland
---nah
I'm status and money to bitches so this joke's shook
you ain't ever flicked through paper, that's why your girl remains a closed book
---kinda cool
1 right hook & you're quittin hard. Trusstt me this fist Smart,
I make professional contact with the hands like an exchange of business cards
---concept is super fire execution is so so
& ya girl's like a fuck train. Dudes been nailing her for weeks in your joint
I mean menopausing for breaks then going back for more til she reaches that point
---eh don't really dig this but the wp ain't bad it's just not good to me
People wanna see you savagely beaten & ill oblige cos I gotta man
Waste him wit the bat or shooter? Everyone chants for the club like soccer fans
---dope ass concept again just the execution isn't "there"

Originally Posted by Og smokinstein

Let wanderer trip and ill book him room, for a vacation in a graveyard of some sort.
Could've been the Palms or The Ramada inn, but you chose dying as the last Resort.
---nah concept good but u ain't do it justice and the scheme was drawn out
Cause what I write is sick, terminal,-get- destroyed like a plane crashing into a airport.
I'm Omar with a Newport, I grew up in the trenches- with-the-shotty-smoking.
---I see the internal rhyme and the punch is cool but wording is just off here
That Mossberg I'm toting like a bad Defensive Back,it'll leave the receiver wide open.
It kickback like a badass kid behind you on a flight, so if Usain/you sane blot then.
---the defensive line fire. Bolt line played tho IMO
I'm the wrong nigga to be provoking, give your last Girlfriend a choppa for combat.
That jus means, youll get the sig by the Ex like the bottom of a contract.
--/fire
I gotta ill mind, and a cell phone full of killers, that's crazy contacts like Hopsin eyes.
Each one kill you in the field, cause beef get-lead-out in the pasture ,like a cattle drive.
---hopsin line is fire . 2nd line not so much
your bitch on a mission think Watergate; operation-deep-throat like a tonsillectomy
She handle that gag-order better than, a witnesses in a trial of a celebrity.
---ideas are fire but damn b ur wording is hurt this week and it's usually my fav thing about ur verses
I got 45th bullet with wanderer's name on, with intentions of doing him especially bad.
Soon as I cock it back, wanderer in the middle of the dessert like a nomad.
---fire

Both had dope angles here

I got wanderer By a slim margin cuz og smoke wasn't on his usual form IMO and let a few rounds fumble
V wand