Your writing is smooth from a flow standpoint and the content is decent provided this doesn't seem like it was supposed to be "The next big thing" from you or anything but at the same time I see a bit too much predictability in the scheme you use. It's like they sound the same, using the same style transition in each one, idk, maybe I'm not making sense to you but I know what I'm trying to say just don't know how I can articulate it better. It reeks of a well seasoned writer gone a bit stale, but at the same time it is still well polished. It was an enjoyable read for the little bit of writing it was, I'd like to see you craft something up with some more effort and thought put into it though. Stay At IT.
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