Hmm. I definitely agree with everyone here on the light hearted and maybe mildly funny vibe this presents and that was cool, alway's room for that. I'm not sure that this was like, masterful, or anything but ...enjoyable to read for what it was worth. I'd say my favorite section and consequently the better written section was
I love my dog, she really knows how to walk on a leash
I hate my landlord, he stated “No Dogs” on the lease
But that just means I lied about my dog on the lease
Am I worried if he sees my dog? Not in the least
I’ll just say my friend was here, I’ve been gone for a week
And I forgot to tell him that it said “No Dogs” on the lease
When my landlord leaves, I’ll hook up my dog with a treat
Then throw on Dogg Pound and we both nod to the beat
^This whole section was executed well. I think the piece kinda lost it's flare at the end in comparison but ...overall I'm going to give this a "ok".
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