Adonis -
Well. I think this was directed at one of us? … J, perhaps? The diction itself is enjoyable, and you used some cool phrases. All in all, you were a little brief and would have benefited from more multiples. If I had truly understood what was going on or got the references, I would have enjoyed it more. This was a cool little piece. Nice read, thanks.
Mr. J - wow man. This was really good. I’m thinking, a husband arrived to the scene of a car accident his wife was involved in? either way it was truly emotional and a great piece. Mechanics were great throughout and I have zero complaints.
Mvgt Mr. J this week, I understood his take on the topic. His mechanics definitely gave him the push on my teetering decision.
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