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Old 03-07-2016, 07:08 PM   #10
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MVGT Timeless

Stronger conviction conveyed, although Maximus's stance was noble as well: Timeless just came off more like Bernie Sanders to me from a political standpoint, while Maximus delivered a valiant verse, Timeless was more Patriotic, Maximus was as well; just to a lesser degree. Timeless's sentence structure was also more interesting and abstract. Timeless was more creative with his choice of words as well, where Maximus rehashed words.

On and all around positive note: Great message from both writers, collectively you have inspired me as I reflected on these final thoughts.

MVGT Timeless

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