I agree with him and not all at the same time. You should alway's put off a big vibe of confidence so that part you have down. The rhyme's, not sure if I'd call them basic but also not necessarily complex, somewhere in the middle but sufficient enough. My main problem with this and where I agree with him is, it's waaaaaaaay too short and really should have either been elaborated on before posting or posted in the cypher section as some sort of exercise.
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