Lol, this was definitely the hardest verse i'very voted on.
Adonis,
I suspect you had 2 verses written because of the way you edited in your verse after mr. J did his, while I thought the rode you took was clever (and daring) I don't think it quite pinned the topic, (even being as good as it was from a technical viewpoint) I mean this was more of a battle verse to me and while I enjoyed it I don't think it was on topic enough for me. (Plus I haven't been around for all this beef that's going on) very well written though, I chuckled a couple of times.
Mr J,
While I've read better from you there were sparks of beauty that was written very well, plus I enjoyed your take on the topic, nice twist at the end as well.
Sorry for the short vote guys, I'm at work and only have a few minutes in my phone. I think this was a very good battle but I think the person's verse who stood out the most to me was mr. J's.. I enjoyed it a bit more (as far as topic relation goes) mvgt = mr.j
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