Jw, pretty solid. Straightforward read for the most part. Can definitely see a little rust that needs some shaking as far as mechanics go but not bad. The ending was cool, felt the last half or so could've leaded up to it better but that's just me.
Marshall, I always hated friends. Seinfeld was my shit and IMO friends tried so hard to be them and it just never worked so they basically just based the show around Ross and Rachel it seemed like. Weird fucking show. Weird verse. Seen better from you for sure, but I feel your wit and overall complete feel gave u the edge here.
V. Mmlp
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