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Old 03-06-2016, 08:27 PM   #7
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Two uh, very different takes in this battle. Mr J, the starting line was dope. I'm a huge fan of writing that allows me to visualize what I just read/said. The story was okay, it was cool. The pacing on it was on point, I never felt like you had some filler in there. Very solid piece.


Adonis, I don't think I've ever read something from you. Anyways, I guess this verse gives me a glimpse on your style of writing. It's cool, I can fucks' with it. The whole Mr. J / Pinot shit is really working in your favor right now. The verse was decent, the whole little j thing at the end was pretty cool. I found some of the lines funny, and that made the piece more enjoyable to me than Mr. J's, so that's that.

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