Asylum, after first read my immediate thought is to just say is that I've seen way better from you. It started off strong for sure. Really enjoyed the opening 4-6 lines then it just seemed as if u rushed the rest of the piece. Sall Goodman weve all been there.
Frank, not familiar with any references and I'm not the Google type bruh. But youre context serves as a golden apron. Verse was chock full of in-depth imagery and great detail. Solid read.
V. Frank
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