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Alice White · 03-05-2016, 08:22 PM

I thought the story was interesting enough, I was just slightly thrown off by the structure of this. But I enjoyed this for what it was. Flow was quite smooth also. Nice work.

03-05-2016, 08:22 PM	#5
Alice White Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 72 Rep Power: 0	I thought the story was interesting enough, I was just slightly thrown off by the structure of this. But I enjoyed this for what it was. Flow was quite smooth also. Nice work. __________________ https://theprincesstroll.wordpress.com