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Old 03-05-2016, 08:19 PM   #15
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Pretty much everything has been said already, but I also just wanted to emphasise how good this was! The directness and raw tone coupled with the emotional layers of depth are the highlights of this work. I actually reread it because of how the conveyed emotions stuck with me during the first time, and because I can relate to the content, to an extent.
There were several quotables in this, too many to name right now. But I thoroughly loved the climactical development of your pure inner-self depiction towards the middle section. The closure was also very well integrated and nicely linked to the opening bars. A great read!
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