Netcees - View Single Post - Letterman vs OG Smokenstein

Pinot Grij · 03-05-2016, 01:20 PM

Smokenstein
Opener is very simple.
You don't gotta give us both spellings of your wp - if the connection is there, we'll get it on our own. The collar bit is cool, but the roaming shit fucked me up.
Palm readers is an old concept.
Hot n Ready lines are old too.
Closer is alright.

vs.

Letterman
Letterman's opener is hot. Fuckin' imagery is hilarious.
Futurama is creative.
Bernstein bears is a cool concept.
Veggie Tales is ehhh.
Smoke and mirrors coulda been dope but you dropped the ball. Think more ferociously the next time cuz the concept coulda been dope.

Honestly, I think Letterman's opener crushed Smoke's entire verse. The imagery of a dude bombing and then throwing a smoke bomb down - perfection. Smoke had alotta tired concepts.

Vote -- Letterman

03-05-2016, 01:20 PM	#14
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Smokenstein Opener is very simple. You don't gotta give us both spellings of your wp - if the connection is there, we'll get it on our own. The collar bit is cool, but the roaming shit fucked me up. Palm readers is an old concept. Hot n Ready lines are old too. Closer is alright. vs. Letterman Letterman's opener is hot. Fuckin' imagery is hilarious. Futurama is creative. Bernstein bears is a cool concept. Veggie Tales is ehhh. Smoke and mirrors coulda been dope but you dropped the ball. Think more ferociously the next time cuz the concept coulda been dope. Honestly, I think Letterman's opener crushed Smoke's entire verse. The imagery of a dude bombing and then throwing a smoke bomb down - perfection. Smoke had alotta tired concepts. Vote -- Letterman __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.