Blam
Had to google the opener. Set up had great rhyming, but punch lacked.
Spotlight was pretty hard. Again, rhyming was crazy.
Witty line is dope.
Kendrick line is alright. I get the reference, but it's not that killer.
Sharp line is cool.
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Inf
Arn Anderson line is crazy dope.
The mag title is a concept I just used last week. I think you executed it better, but still too similar for me.
Laundry line is alright.
Dobro is a pretty light concept.
Closer is decent.
Inf came out with guns blazing, but lost some steam as things went on. Blam had good construction but nothing really slayed for me. It was consistently pretty good. Overall, I gotta say that nothing Blam put up rivalled Inf's opener, which was fuckin hilarious and well constructed. It's what I'll remember from this battle, so it's what I'm voting for.
Vote -- Infiltration
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