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Old 03-05-2016, 12:55 PM   #9
Pinot Grij
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Des
Opener is dope - the wordplay could've been even fiercer, but it was still dope.
I didn't see the Creed movie, but I get the picture. Pretty good.
Bitchmade is a weird diss for Making a Murderer. I get it, but I don't think it's the first thing that comes to people's minds.
One Love line is dope. Super clean setup/punch construction.
Closer is funny. I knew there'd be a flip on that story this week and you did it in a comedic way.

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Strange
Opener has some damn fine imagery - well executed.
Leo line is dope and creative as fuck.
Rhyming in the Matrix line is dope "Idk y this shit-tier bitch is here" - nice. Gives the punch more impact for sure.
Bark is LOTB. Wow.
If there's wp in the closer, then I'm missing it. It just seems like a complete throwaway in my eyes.

Yoooo, this is a really dope battle and hella close. Des really only had one egregious miss and that was Making a Murderer. But Strange's closer was a miss for me too. It sucks to pick a winner in this instance because I don't think you can really call either guy a loser in this instance. I gotta put Des's opener and One Love up against Strange's Leo and Bark. And I liked Leo and Bark a bit better.

Vote -- Strange
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