@OG that lines in my hand palm reader shit was dope to me
pantheon could have been something but the wording let you down
rest I wasn't feeling too much tbc
Letterman actually had a few nice lines here, the smokebombs was a cool name play I hadn't seen done. Fry with the metal was a good concept, I hated the comma between Stein and bears even though I got it, that horrid comma ruined the shit for me man...
last four I could have done without if we're keeping it a buck
Letterman got it on the strength of those first four
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