[Alice White]

I really liked how you started off with this, you employed some nice references and also interesting imagery. Thought that the owls nest line was also quite nice. It rather seemed like a keystyle, since you addressed several themes here, which is nice to see. My only suggestion would be to focus a bit more on how thorough your rhyme schemes are. I liked your multis, but at a few spots your usage of rhymes hindered the verse in its smoothness. Nice read overall!