[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Cred

@Vividlyvague


30 shot swiss cheese 'em, show up to ur wake wit the cannon bruh
den put 6 in ur Box during the March to match ur death date on the calendar
Aiight, a little forced but I'm feeling
more clips.. leave his ass slumped in the river on sum war shit
they'll find this nigga wasted in Germany somewhere like a Orc trip
Weak
i'm back, bringing flames! u're a fuckin fag it's a shame
cus i knew u were a pussy before i even seen the Vag in ur name
Nah
dog u sparring wit a God so watch me lay 'em out proper
bitch its gonna be hard to reach these bars, that's a west coast chopper
Ok
i let the tom burst.. pistol play? u kno i bomb first
mannnn i'll have 'em dancing with that metal like a rock concert
Nah
plus i'm the predicted favorite so u already kno u're in trouble dude
u lost Initially.. cus abbreviating ur name s'the only time u seeing a W
I dig the idea a lot but execution off, like the punch didn't end up making a lot of sense bro

drill season.

Vs

Originally Posted by Vividlyvague

Check your clip.

How you got anywhere being as frail as you are got me baffled.
Don't let this topical nerd destroyer cred, we know you already lost that battle.
average
I don't pull punches, I might break a bone with a hectic left.
One shot'll shake him like an etch a sketch, that's what you call a credit check.
There should have been some sort of better tie in to credit check. Weak
I don't give a fuck. Honestly, I might run into a gunfight with a hunting knife.
He'll c red when I gut his wife, his gun'll get him jammed like he belonged on a Wonder slice.
Nah bro
Homie I ain't nothing nice. I seen so much, that being street just don't cut it.
Would tell this fag ta spit theatrical gunplay, but that real life shit is outta his budget.
like the idea but not the wording
This dude wouldn't make it down the block in another hood. Who's he kiddin?
This AR is a doosey spittin. He rocks J's? Shoot his ankles til the 2-3 missin.
Don't get it
FOH nigga. You only be in the street long enough to get called inside for suppertime.
Only time this bitch'll hold a can to my ear is if a string is connected to the other side.
Nah

...tag that bitch.

Cred takes this. Dug the opener and the chopper bar best. Cool ideas all round but some wording issues. Vague, you had a really light opener and that was all to compete, which wasn't enough. I liked the idea with the. Theatrical gunplay bar but the execution was just.. nah.

V/Cred