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Old 03-02-2016, 01:53 AM   #4
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Originally Posted by Genocide View Post
What you mean bredren?
Jesus take the wheel...


This was more on point than that other piece you had going though bruh
I really enjoyed the vibe you put out there & some of the lyricism is slick

S'when i sent cupid to hunt for a bitch, you cant commit lovelier sins
had to covet the wench, birthed adam n eve with the ugliest pig
^^^^

That was a cool concept but I felt kind of weird with the use of pig...
perhaps it has something to do with the religion based concept you were going for
either way I thought this was more cohesive & it makes me want to punch a motherfucker
on a sidenote...do not strive to be who you were yesterday Geno...
growth is what makes us stronger as writers & it is time to look forward to a more glorious day.
but this style makes me want to revive the OM to its heyday
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