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Old 05-09-2013, 08:42 PM   #39
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I AM the master of my destiny I just mask my complexities,
"What about your past felonies?" Those were from bouts of doubt and brash jealousy,
Now I'm past that, I'm on rap tracks tryin to grasp the melodies,
"HAHAHA Hashtag backtocelibacy!! You lack the relevancy
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that was my favorite section, seems like you wanted to go in hard there
and you did exactly that, I enjoyed it, the flow was on point
very nice braggadocio drop...this was solid my dude..keep writing
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