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Old 03-01-2016, 09:44 PM   #10
Pinot Grij
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Cred

Opener is pretty wordy.
Orc/Germany line is dope.
Vag is fucking hilarious.
West Coast Chopper is fuckin dope.
Dancing metal not my fave.
Closer is wack tho.

VV
Opener is pretty straightforward flip.
Etcha Sketch line overworked for sure. Opposite of opener.
Wonder slice is bad.
I don't even get the next one.
Jordan line is bad.
Closer is very played.

VV, I like you on the topical side, but this was a big swing and a miss here for me, dog. Cred had three really dope lines. West Coast Chopper is one of the most inventive lines I've seen in a while - that complex simplicity is where it's at and you hit that sweet spot.

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