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Old 03-01-2016, 06:50 PM   #5
Alice White
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Nice work here. Thought that the beginning along with the mystery machine were the highlights of this verse. I can tell you were rather playing around with this, I really like the approach you took with the overall concept of the appreciation of your work. Rhyme scheme was also nice, good work overall!
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