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Old 03-01-2016, 02:25 PM   #9
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Very strong word usage from the Dr. here...your descriptive style is unmatched I feel
you have grown since the first time we have crossed paths my friend, you continue to grow
the vibe of this piece is like a trip into an allusion that we all seem to miss at times.
the poetic flow of this really brings a breath of fresh air as I continue perusing the halls where I rest my head
I apologize for my late praise due to other areas holding my attention...keep up the work bruh

porch rockers, storm watchers, I'm refilling the flask.
we'll watch tail-ends of tempests keep tilling the grass-
lightning kissing Marblehead turning silica glass.
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dope shit
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