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Old 03-01-2016, 12:19 PM   #6
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This was a cool verse, I enjoy the paragraphical formed irradical manical sabbatical collapsible rhyme style
I forgot which section it was but I think you said...what are these weapons for...kind of Em esque right there
I just cant put my finger on which song that whole idea came from, either way this was dope altogether and is hard to break apart to dive deeper into
dope shit
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