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Old 03-01-2016, 12:15 PM   #16
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critics weigh in and keep sayin my verse was light, last weeks was harder
if I don't come heavy, it means my current opponent sucks, just being honest
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HA! I can relate to this right here, this whole verse was fire from the jump to the end
the flow of this is smooth as duck shit & makes me want to get back into this mode again
regardless you had quotable after quotable in this piece here. a dope read, heres a bump for you
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