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Old 02-29-2016, 02:27 AM   #9
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Upon reflection both pieces were well done. I feel as though Zen may have been outwritten here. slecht played with a more cohesive concept the intro blends well with the wide array of hues as he starts to follow through. I felt he had some stronger ideas but I cringed upon the maroon reference.

reading Zens another time had his opponent underperformed he would have had this in the bag. there is a lot to be said but it just isn't enough to overthrow slechts piece

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