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Old 05-09-2013, 07:08 PM   #7
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Good to see new faces. Thanks dropping feed in other posts

So this was pretty clean for what it was, fundementally sound. Had decent mechanics. But like everyone else was saying -just gotta step the concept game up a little bit. Its definitely not always easy to find new ideas. Shit -even I've dropped shit before that I thought was fresh as fuck and people said it was played. So I try to go completely outside the box to a realm that is almost impossible to get to when I want to be as original as possible. Doesn't always work but you get the point I think.

Keep dropping and feeding. Bring the others from wherever you were that you think would be a good addition. Fuck it -bring the worthless vets you spoke of two.. we'll eat'em alive if we must
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