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Pharaohs Army · 02-28-2016, 08:27 AM

Good read; solid narrative.
I'd encourage any newcomer or person wishing to improve to pay attention to how you write.
Incredibly impressive structure&rhymes, but I feel like it's "my role" to tell you that this is a little bit too clean.

02-28-2016, 08:27 AM	#3
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Good read; solid narrative. I'd encourage any newcomer or person wishing to improve to pay attention to how you write. Incredibly impressive structure&rhymes, but I feel like it's "my role" to tell you that this is a little bit too clean.